His Last Supper
For 48 hours, strangers paraded up cold,
concrete steps, investigating a lifetime
of collectibles, fishing lures, marina sketches, chopped
bits of animal pelts he had placed inside boxes
like trophies. Dusty books about ancient aliens,
Yukon prostitutes, and PCs for Dummies
bordered the edges of each room, showing off
those subjects that had consumed his mind
in private. The procession continued after the burial,
each visitor anxious to get their hands on a piece
of his life’s work, odd figurines, food choppers, Hummels
with missing body parts, and miscellaneous books
on how to be a millionaire in secret.
A blue-haired lady wearing a tight
bun gaped in disgust. The man who’d fed her family
40 years of fish dinners was a disgrace, his home gutted,
his skeletons laid out on the table for all of the hungry
bargain hunters to see.
--Linda G. Hatton
Oh Linda, this is really good. Haunting in its detail and minutiae ... and ultimately sad.
ReplyDeletePrivate lives of only publicly known people. Nice venture into the little known. You've got me asking all kinds of "what-ifs."
ReplyDeleteExcellent work, Linda.
ReplyDeleteA beautifully written poem of shimmering insight. Well done.
ReplyDeletePowerful writing!
ReplyDeleteI like this. It could easily be a short story because I want to know more. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for reading and for your thoughtful comments!
ReplyDeleteAh, Linda. This is riveting in its detail and questioning in its mystery for the reader. Who was this man? What was his name? Who is the old lady? So many questions, so few informative answers for the trivia buff. In the end what's given is all the answers most would ever truly need.
ReplyDeleteExcellent work.
What a nice comment. Thank you so much, Claudette! I appreciate your support.
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